I love it that reviews are coming in on some online sites (Amazon, etc.). The feedback is helpful and honest I feel. My 3 stars review touches on an issue I had in writing the ‘timeless message’ – the early story and characters are
under-developed. This was intentional and will disappoint many readers. My reasoning was that the book would be incredibly long if I wrote deeper, and, more importantly, I wanted the book to imitate the knowledge we have of our world now. We do not have a
fully developed knowledge of our beginnings – we have sketches. And yet we know enough to have a solid grasp of how the story works.
Also, I am writing a deeper series, broken into each level of the Habitat, but from Jimmy's point of veiw. This
will allow for all the depth that is inside to come out unrestrained.
I have no experience with writing and hope readers will remember the bigger truths and reason behind this endeavor – fighting human slavery! It could have been a cookbook…
now that would have been highly underdeveloped!!
So grateful again for the reviews, good and bad! ALL REVIEWS HELP OTHERS FORM OPINIONS AND DECIDE FOR THEMSELVES.
FOR JESUS FAME AND OTHERS FREEDOM!!